For Week #3, I work on the notes you gave me for each of the different shot. And here is all the notes that I address that you gave out to me on the feedback.

Dancing Shot

• Push the first jump so she would go farther to screen right
• On the part where she jump and spin around, I made her continue to move to screen left. Making her land somewhere farther on screen left.

Parkour Shot

• When the he fall down with the bar, I made his right arm do a rotation. His left arm do a reach to catch the bar.

Dialogue Shot

(Shot 1)

• You can see her eyes more when she looking down
• Fix the eyebrow so the end point isn’t too low
• Brought back her half eyeball look (lower the eye lid)
• She look turn her head sooner and faster
• Quicken hand slamming table

(Shot 2)

• Fix the thing in-between the eyebrow
• Added half blinks when she looking around
• Added new hand gesture and made them lead the action

(Shot 3)

• Work on the eyebrow to have the little dip in them (like you said to have in them)
• Have her look a little sad when she say, “You never take me seriously”.

(Shot 4)

• Softer expression so she doesn’t look mad
• Have her eye close to give the effect of her begging

(Shot 5)

• Have the mom (black one) hold her pose until the daughter (white one) is finish with her action. Then made it feel more snappy and just drop her hand.
• Also remove the mom leaning back but now just falling forward.
• The daughter have a smug face at the end when she say “Ok”.
• Also added half blink when she look forward and away from the mom.